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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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She's barely sleeping now melodies floating in her head pounding on her skull any light disturbs her so don't make light of this Trapped and aching she's got some purely quilt-like qualities stitched together and fluffy wrapped around she's barely eating now nourishment makes her sick she always feels weak struggling to make it from one hour to the next she goes above and beyond her call of duty and she has no idea why sorry guys, I'm sick.. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
wow. I'm sick too and you just described how I feel. hope you get better. good write. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great writing Allysa, I really enjoy reading your work and this is no exception. Thanks for sharing it with us. Oh and I'm sorry to hear that you are sick, hope you get better soon  Andrew |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
i hope you feel better =) (you prolly have already, hopefully) anyway, i could see pieces of myself in this. it has awesome imagery. right now today has been one of the most stressful days of my life and my car is broke down and stuff so yeah...i feel pretty sick like this. thanks for sharing, it lightens me. bergundy At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Hey, I know you from high school. (; It's me Juli... well then again I was in a different year than you, but kyla knows me. I liked your poem. -Juju |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I hope your feeling better now. Your poem is very descriptive, and very well written. |
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