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Stinky Twinkie
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0 posted 2005-03-07 01:11 AM


My breath is pretty stinky
It smells like donk.
Or a rabid pig smoking a cigar
In some old honky-tonk.

It reminds me of a gravel pit.
Yeah, that’s what it’s like.
Or when you set fire
To the front tired of a bike.

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1 posted 2005-03-07 08:49 AM


go brush your teeth!!
WinterWren
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2 posted 2005-03-07 01:21 PM


Wow, you must have really bad breath! Im glad Im not anywhere near you lol.
Another funny one from you that I love.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

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3 posted 2005-03-07 07:44 PM


This is unusually honest and self-deprecating, I love it.

Andrew

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