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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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0 posted 2005-03-02 06:05 PM



I Am Always Here!

Tell me if your hurting
Please let me feel your pain.
Because I will never leave you standing
In the pouring rain.

When your world is clouded over...
When you don't know who to turn to...
Just cry those tears and come to me
For I am always gonna be here for you!

Lay your head on my shoulder,
Tell me all your troubles and fears.
I will listen to your stories,
And I will try to dry your tears.

So, when your world goes out of control
Your life no longer a straight line
You can come to me...I'll make you see
That everything will soon be fine.

Your life is what you make of it
So, do you have got to do
But remember this: when you don't think you can go on
I am and always will be there for someone like you!

© Copyright 2005 Sweetpoet16m4u04 - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2005-03-02 06:41 PM


the very best friend I have ever had...is a guy...this is soooo sweet...anyone would be lucky to be your friend.
Cloud 9
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2 posted 2005-03-02 07:04 PM


I love it!! This is very sweet, when I want to talk I will keep you in mind.
moonguardian2004
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3 posted 2005-03-07 09:37 AM


well SEA you are defenitely right. I have been friends with him since pre-school. He is truely one of a kind and one of my best friends.

Hugs

~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~

Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2005-03-08 08:13 AM


Well put..and..my best friend so happens to be male....on this site,,he goes by Ringo. He has been there since day one for me,,thru too many things to number,,let alone remember!

No one really cares,,why should I?

Foxyoasis
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5 posted 2005-03-30 01:48 AM


where were you when i was in HS damn *snaps fingers* never change no matter what ya hear?

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


dodge_chick2003
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since 2004-01-18
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California
6 posted 2005-04-02 08:02 AM


I love this poem. There are not very many good guys out there right now, and if there is they are all taken. In your life your heart will get broken by not just one girl but by many. DONT EVER let that change the way you are. You are a gift from god to all us females!!!!!
saved_by_grace
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7 posted 2005-04-02 05:37 PM


This was SOOO sweet, Sweetpoet16m4u04!!  My best friend...a gentleman...was a member of this site and he was ALL these things and more!  Thank you for this...as I remember him today...and every day!     Becka
Jezzika
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8 posted 2005-04-07 10:55 AM


That was a really sweet poem....it is always awesome to have a guy as a best friend... loved this poem!

you know he really wants me

PoeTik JusTice
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9 posted 2005-04-09 04:55 AM


Aww! This is so sweet! I need a guy friend like that in my life!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
     *~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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10 posted 2005-05-08 08:45 PM


i thought this was very sweet, just like the other girls, im sitting here like, AWWWW....omg awwwww...lol, but, seeing as noone else anything about the poem itself, im not crazy about it. i love the ideas in it, i think they're as sweet as can be, but i dont really like how the poem was written, it seemed a little forced. so good ideas, i was wow-ed by that aspect of it, but wasnt crazy about the poem itself.


still love ya tho!!
_keryn

I cant believe how long i waited
for the boy to turn into my man...

Now if i could figure out, if it was worth the wait.

Poems of Autumn
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since 2005-04-18
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11 posted 2005-05-09 11:38 AM


Oh my goodness! I am always looking for that guy who will listen to my troubles because he wants to, not because he thinks he has to. When you go to ask them what they think they will usually answer, "I don't know" and then you know they weren't really listening. I actually started to tear up a little!
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