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Birth of Love
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Birth of Love |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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U know when u fall in love, It is a trip and fall, How did it happen? When did happen? The answers seem to disappear, When love appears, In this realm of mankind, Love picks no place, It shows up one day, One time- For a lifetime If your luck is right, Once you find it, Don’t lose it, Or you will regret- The best gift u ever had Now being returned to God, Who gives it to all, To cherish and to care, But beware- Lust is not what you seek, For it comes in an instance, And takes a lifetime to heal, With lies and shame you will deal, Fortune has blessed you, So love without fear, And lose it without sorrow, For my love has been lost. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
hmm... i like the idea its a much written on topic but u wrote differently than most do on love. thanks for sharing |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
A brilliant peice of writing I really enjoyed reading it  Andrew |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Thanks for the kind words. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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