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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2005-02-26 07:07 PM


I drove by again last night,
to this place I once called home.

Someone else was sitting all alone,
in the room I used to call my own.

It wasn't till later,
that I realised in my heart.

That it was still my home,
and my heart lives there now.

  I wonder and ponder, if it will ever be the same.
  missing you is so hard, when you are so far away.
  But will the heart I have go on, if I never go back?

This place I called home,
the good and the bad.

But now when I go by,
I seem to become sad.

[This message has been edited by Kellie_Cantrell (02-26-2005 11:35 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-02-26 07:22 PM


quote:
That is was still my home,
and my heart lives there now.


Apart from that little distraction in the middle this was a very enjoyable peice.

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2 posted 2005-03-04 01:22 PM


Much better

Andrew

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