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Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

0 posted 2005-02-26 06:05 PM

Why am I waiting for something
When I don't know if something's there?
Why not just wait for nothing
And at least know that nothing's there?

Why ask why and when's my time,
When the answer just takes my time away?
So many questions without answers,
Why ask them anyway?

Too many pieces to the puzzle,
Too many locked doors and hearts,
There are no answers to my questions,
I should've known from the start,

Why am I waiting for something,
When I don't know if something's there?
Why am I waiting for something,
When it feels like nothing's there?

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I just needed to write something and post it, in hopes that it'd make me feel better as I'm currently sinking deeper and deeper under the weather.

Rebel of the sacred heart

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

1 posted 2005-02-26 11:26 PM

hmmm i liked the idea alot but some of the repetidness worked while some didnt. but again it was a good idea

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2005-02-26 11:47 PM

"Why am I waiting for something,
When I don't know if something's there?
Why am I waiting for something,
When it feels like nothing's there?"

Maybe you're waiting there because your gut knows that there is gonna be something great there. lol. (just my little analysis).
If you ever need to talk e-mail me. Stay Positive!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

3 posted 2005-02-27 12:16 PM

Laura- In retrospect, I realize that the repetition does wear on the overall impact. It was really only supposed to be the first stanza like that.

Alli- Thanks again. You're one of my greatest supporters. I'll try to stay positive, because I know I'm not very often.

Rebel of the sacred heart

dodge_chick2003
Member

since 2004-01-18

Posts 136
California

4 posted 2005-04-02 09:40 PM

Wow, I really enjoyd reading this.Something about he first line just seemed to pull me in. I find my self asking these questions all the time. Keep Writing!!!!!

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