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0 posted 2005-02-19 02:17 AM



You read me like open mic night,
So smooth, surreal, almost life like,
Flip my pages as you scan my moment,
As I rub on your soul like ointment,
To hide the scars you struggle today,
Many days you wash as if it was yesterday,
See, you say I speak gibberish,
You just can’t stand being selfish,
As I flow through the river of life,
And find me a petite wife,
Your jealous self can’t rest but blink,
For I left you standing silly in a wink,
Carry yourself now on the shoulders of pride,
And you think you can steal my bride?
You must be high or be joking,
Cause on reality you seem to be choking,
Tonight is not the night you want to end it,
For I stand diligent and defend it,
Don’t put a show now that you lost,
Just keep on walking and check it,
This is the silent breeze that you be feeling,
So much hatred and sadness got you dealing,
Take my hand and forgive and forget,
Nah, I rather see you live and regret.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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1 posted 2005-02-19 06:43 PM


I really liked this...my faborite lines were...

"You read me like open mic night,
So smooth, surreal, almost life like,
Flip my pages as you scan my moment..."


Anyways, great write. Keep Posting!

~Alli~

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2 posted 2005-02-20 12:52 PM


u like the new picture? I thought you would. Check the one I posted that is called "Untitled" and look for me in the Dark Poetry Forum...

:0)

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