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bekahlekah45
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since 2006-03-14
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0 posted 2006-06-08 01:32 AM



Im so bored that im gunna make a meaningless stupid silly effortless poem

I like to play the piano
because of its delicate sound
But the only time i'll play
is when no one else is around

I'll admit that i can be shy
But im also pretty out there
You just hafta know me
and u'll see i'm not bare (haha i couldnt think of anything! leave me alone im bored lol)

B flat playing
with a E an C
really keeps my attention
and amuses me

now that ive gotten you bored
with this lousy poem of mine
I'm gunna go to bed
cuz omg look at the time


okay sorry u guys had to suffer through that poem.  im beyond bored.  so im goin to bed!

© Copyright 2006 Rebekah - All Rights Reserved
stargal
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
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1 posted 2006-06-08 02:17 AM


LOL

I loveeeeeeeeeeee it! Awesome write, i think i'm going to be laughing about this all night... lolz, did i just rhyme? omgosh!  


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bekahlekah45
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since 2006-03-14
Posts 533

2 posted 2006-06-08 10:44 AM


hahahahahahaha i get what you mean!  yes it was awesome wasnt it...i'd say its my favorite.  lol jk

poise_and_rationality
Junior Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 46
my mind
3 posted 2006-06-08 11:36 AM


you never sleep!!!!mind you i never either!!! ahah haha well bekah  liked the poem and even if you were bored it's still good if you know what i mean? i cant get my words out!!!! lolz

par
x

Give me attention
Give me envy
Give me malice
Give me a break!
Have some composure
And where is your posture?

stargal
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
OR USA
4 posted 2006-06-08 12:01 PM


YEAH!!!!!!!! Rock On!!!!!!!!!

lolz... im tired two hrs of sleep... I STILL LOVE THIS POEM

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bekahlekah45
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since 2006-03-14
Posts 533

5 posted 2006-06-08 09:58 PM


k so rhythym was off, rhyming wasnt too good, uhh didnt make that much sense...

[This message has been edited by bekahlekah45 (06-10-2006 09:07 AM).]

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