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Sorrow by Betrayal
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Sorrow by Betrayal |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
All you do Is take and take and take. And warp my mind, As I make another mistake. I just don’t understand, Why it always has to rain. And why your poison, Always loves my veins. I can’t believe my ears, It just can’t be true. You’re back to lying again, What the hell’s wrong with you? No! Don’t you dare try to placate me. This has been the last straw. I’m gonna break free- YOUR LIES! YOUR DRAMA! YOUR VIRUS! This sadness so profound… It all drags me down, Makes me hide, In that little space in my mind, Where I can forget the outside… How could you do this to me?…. "Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Woah! YOU TELL THEM! LOL. I can just feel the hate in this poem! Awesome Job!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
LoL thanks...I think. "Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wonderful writing Spine Grinder, I enjoyed reading it. Andrew  |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Thank you! I've always enjoyed your work, so I'm glad you liked something of mine. "Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether |
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