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AllyKat
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0 posted 2005-02-02 09:18 PM


Everynight when I think about us,
I remeber those times we shared together.
These tourturous nights making me think,
Think what had happened between us.
Though every night I try to sleep,
Our memories keep me up.
But every night I think and wonder
        Do you still love me?
           'Cause I still love you.

              ~~~~AllyKat

~§~Hugs and kisses my Dearest~§~

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aussie teen
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1 posted 2005-02-04 09:13 AM


another beautiful poem, that i relate too... keep expressing your feelings and it makes thhem easier to bear....
keep writing....
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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2 posted 2005-02-04 08:59 PM


Yea I can really relate to this too....great write, even though it's kinda depressing. *sigh*

~Alli~

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Savage Quiescence
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Wandering
3 posted 2005-02-05 10:46 AM


One of the worst things is to love someone who doesn't return those feelings. Keep your chin up and your pen moving.

www.livejournal.com/users/alimakins

Smoothy
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since 2002-12-02
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The dark side of the moon
4 posted 2005-02-05 07:44 PM


Love is the sharpest double-edged blade. It cuts through the sadness with one edge, and tears through your life with the other.

Rebel of the sacred heart

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
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land of cheese (Wisconsin)
5 posted 2005-02-08 09:35 PM


simple, yet well written

nice job

bergundy

At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio

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