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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131
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2/2/2005 Wednesday 1:09 Am ...SILENCE... Maybe I could feel again, Maybe I'm not scared, Can I lie to myself and not believe it, Does that at all seem fair, How could you say so little Yet say you feel so much, How could you ever know me, Eyes closed and mouth sealed shut, I guess you don't know how it works, I guess we both could be scared, Maybe we'll never know who's lieing, Maybe we'll never know who cares, I wish I could make myself feel Make you understand, We are so empty, together, This didn't go as we planned, The things I mean to say, Only ever come out wrong, You don't hear me anyways, Whats lost is too far gone, If your eyes never wandered, Then could you notice me, If only I could stop from shaking, Allow myself to speak, If you truly heard my voice, Would you still shy away, If you didn't shut me out, Then I could promise that I'd stay, Why does it seem that I whisper, As tears swell in my eyes, Maybe you'll never listen, As I turn away and cry, Silence is forever spoken, My heart beats one less time, Maybe I don't want you to hear me, Silence is forever mine... I see me frowning in your eyes... |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
WOW!!!!.... This was so good!!!!! I loved it.. This is going in my library..  Jezzika you know he really wants me |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
Dang it.. posted twice.. woops  sorry... |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
'Silence is forever spoken, My heart beats one less time, Maybe I don't want you to hear me, Silence is forever mine...' Wow, the ending leaves a big impact. This was awesome, I really liked it. -Kelly remember to breathe after you exhale. |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
"If you truly heard my voice, Would you still shy away, If you didn't shut me out, Then I could promise that I'd stay," wow this was powerful great write Laura |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
Thank you guys )I see me frowning in your eyes... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow...just amazing write Alison...I'm just total speechless. (in a good way of course!  )~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
Silence is forever spoken, My heart beats one less time, Maybe I don't want you to hear me, Silence is forever mine... this part is so beautiful... it basically sums up me and my ex now... even after 6 months i still love him with all my soul but he just either cant tell or doesnt want to know.... i want to read more if you ever need some one to talk to email me Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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