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AllyKat
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since 2005-01-30
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jeffersonville,in

0 posted 2005-01-31 05:25 PM


This Ring I cherish,
His heart I hold.
Those harsh words she says,
are all big and bold.

Though I should care,
I one bit don't
Those who care don't matter
But those who matter don't care.

So say what you feel,
Do what you want,
Because you can't hurt me.

I cherish this Ring,
For some reason, which I don't know.
His heart I hold, I always will.
And those harsh words she says,
They might be true but I love each
and every one of them.

I shall cherish them like I do this Ring.

                     ~~By:AllyKat~~

© Copyright 2005 Allison Himmelheber - All Rights Reserved
*Alli4000*
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1 posted 2005-01-31 07:26 PM


With you here, the allisons can rule pip...cause...we're just awesome!! O_O  lol.

Anyways...amazing write! You really have talent! Keep Posting and I'll keep reading, and welcome to pip!

~Alli~

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AllyKat
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since 2005-01-30
Posts 73
jeffersonville,in
2 posted 2005-01-31 08:14 PM


lol yupp!.....i'm bored. Theres nobody to talk to online everyone's either busy or offline.  >.< BORDEM(sp?)!!!!
aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
3 posted 2005-02-01 08:54 AM


this is beautiful ally.... excelent first post...
keep posting and i will keep reading too
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

Christioned
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since 2004-01-15
Posts 93
Huddling in the dark
4 posted 2005-02-01 04:47 PM


This was a very nice first piece. Keep posting. Pip is an amazing place to be.
By the way: the Alison's may one day rule pip, but the people from Indiana will one day rule the world(lol). Just kidding.

"See my wrists;
I feel your pain."-Creed

Jezzika
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since 2005-01-05
Posts 154
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5 posted 2005-02-02 10:59 AM


"Though I should care,
I one bit don't
Those who care don't matter
But those who matter don't care.

I loved this part... this poem was very good!!

i am also farily new and have not posted a poem yet... I have found everyone here very nice!!

Jezzika

you know he really wants me

AllyKat
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since 2005-01-30
Posts 73
jeffersonville,in
6 posted 2005-02-02 03:23 PM


Thanks to all of you guys!...I really appreciate your opinions ^^.  
Acies
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7 posted 2005-02-12 02:58 AM


First of all, let me welcome you to Passions.  I hope you enjoy your experience with the other members of PIP.  If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to ask any of your forum moderators or any of the site administrators.

Secondly, thanks for sharing
it is apparent that this forum will benefit from your poetry
keep them coming and thanks for the read

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