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Teen Poetry #7

Thank You

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-01-24 01:03 AM

I want,
I want somebody.

Somebody to listen,
somebody to care.

I need somebody to make my smile glisten,
and show me that they will be there.

I need,
I need you.

I need you to listen,
to care.

I need you to make my smile glisten,
and to show me that you will always be there.

Thank you for listening,
caring,
making my smile glisten again
and for always being there.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2005-01-24 01:29 AM

...And for some reason part of me cant help wishing I'd been the person to do that... lol. Well, thats just me. *shrugs* I liked this, and I'm honored to be the first to reply. Can't say I'm not envious. I wish I had someone like that in my life. Glad you appriciate them so much!

Rich

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Rebecca St. James
No Worries
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"I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless"

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

2 posted 2005-01-24 10:09 AM

Hey Sweetheart,
Just a beautiful poem and you will always have that person in me no matter what. You probably already know that by now anways!!

Love always, Chris

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