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tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2005-01-19 10:28 PM

K so this is def. not my best work and I know there's another poem with this title, it's what i"m feeling so enjoy and let me know what you think!

Look at me and tell me,
That I’m the one you want,
I don’t know where else to look
O the “what ifs” , how they taunt.

I want it to be me, not her!
Let my heart ring out to yours,
For these tears can no longer continue,
Please don’t let them pour.

I wish this feeling would fade away,
It’d be so easy not to care.
It’d be so easy to act as if,
I wasn’t jealous when you weren’t there.

My jealousy has taken over now,
I wish with all of me that you loved me,
I want you to forget about her,
I don’t want this to end badly.

I’d give up all the guys in the world,
If only to just have you,
What is it about you that carries me,
It’s all that gets me through

I’ll send you an SOS to save me,
Save me from this broken heart.
And I know when you don’t come,
I’ll begin to fall apart.

Nonetheless I’ll get up again,
And look at you and see,
That no matter how much you break my heart,
There will always be my jealousy.

Erin

AIM-blueyed angel940
One day u'll ask which is more important,u or my life. I'll answer my life and u'll walk away never knowing u are my life.

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

1 posted 2005-01-19 10:44 PM

Hey Hun,
I dont know what your talking about by saying this is not one of your best works! I truly thought it was amazing both powerful and beautiful and not to mention truly heartfelt. Hey love is the most difficult emotion out there we all know that. We all want to find that special someone and when we think that has happend and they have someone else already we just break apart and die inside. We feel that we want and need that person but in reality there are more important necessities then love. You are a wonderful girl and one day your prince charming will come and i say that because if he doesnt he truly is missing out on someone special!!

Great BIG Hugs, Chris

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

2 posted 2005-01-19 10:46 PM

hmmm i liked it i really liked the part that says
Ill send you a SOS to same me...

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