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Christioned
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Huddling in the dark

0 posted 2005-01-17 04:37 PM




She was the first thing
my new born eyes ever saw.
When as a child I fell and scraped my knee
she was the one to pick me up
and kiss my tears away.
When entering high school was always on my mind
she was the one who taught me to
be brave and stand alone.
As I turned sixteen
We both learned to let go a little.
Now that I might lose her
I know I'm not ready to be without my mom.

"We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing"

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1 posted 2005-01-17 07:44 PM


I loved and it was was smiling at the write until I got to the second to last line.  I'm so sorry that you might lose her.  I don't know the circumstances or what's going on or anything, but if you ever need to talk e-mail me.

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Christioned
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Huddling in the dark
2 posted 2005-01-18 05:34 PM


Thanks Ali. It's just a really weird situation. But I'm okay, I think.

By the way; the day I actually wrote this on to paper was the 15 of Jan. That day was the day I joined Pip last year. I've been here a year.

"We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing"

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