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Christioned
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Huddling in the dark

0 posted 2005-01-17 04:32 PM



Looking at this wall
that I have built of sand and stone.
Three stand on one side
while I stand on this side alone.
On their's it seems bright and sunny
while mine seems to be dark and crummy.
The wall seems built perfectly
perfectly keeping each side isolated,
each side alone.
I can never blong to their world
that world born of light.
This wall that divides us is too strong
for I was born a creature of the night.

"We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing"

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Jezzika
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since 2005-01-05
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1 posted 2005-01-19 12:33 PM


"On their's it seems bright and sunny
while mine seems to be dark and crummy."

This part was awesome.  I really liked this poem......

you know he really wants me

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