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WranglrButts9
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since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

0 posted 2005-01-11 09:12 PM

Thoughts of You

I sit in this room
Thinking of you
And also our time together
That has come and now past

My head is whirling
Through every word you said,
Ever move you took,
I’m remembering,
Every callus on you hands,
Every freckle on you face,
The smell of your clothes,
The taste of your kiss.

My heart is beating faster,
Than I’ve ever felt before
Everything I’ve thought about
Causes my heart to speed up
In this lonely body of mine.

Thinking and feeling all of this,
Makes me ache even more,
And knowing I’ll never have you again
Makes me want to give up all hope,
But I’m not that kind of person
I’ll keep pushing ‘till the end
So while I’m waiting….

My head will keep whirling
My heard will beat faster
I’m doing all of this
Because of my thoughts of you!

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
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1 posted 2005-01-11 10:16 PM

quick think of something else, like Math... before you pass out!!!

great poem

WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

2 posted 2005-01-11 10:34 PM

THANKS SEA!!! Lol, I thought of this last night after listening to a song I can REALLY relate to...

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-01-11 11:21 PM

ok now i gotta know...(if you tell me anyway- lol) what was the song???

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

4 posted 2005-01-12 12:08 PM

"But I’m not that kind of person
I’ll keep pushing ‘till the end
So while I’m waiting…."

Ahh, I can certainly relate to those words so well. I'm not that kind of person either, though it may cause me all sorts of emo stress. I can certainly attest to feeling this way often, well, actually, most of the time for a good many years! A very awesome poem! Truly!

-Rich

Winamp Is Playing:
"Blood (Empty Promises)"
Papa Roach
Getting Away With Murder

"I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless"

WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

5 posted 2005-01-12 08:31 AM

Lol, I dont actually remember the name.... it was on the radio, thats all I know.

Thanks!!! Its very rarely that I give up, and if I do, its only for my health, lol.... Glad you liked it.

I need to fix a few spelling errors, but don't have time right now... Sorry!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2005-01-12 07:36 PM

Bailey! I love this (i always do

). But seriously this is awesome!

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