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wvplayernotreally
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since 2002-11-06
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0 posted 2004-12-29 02:43 PM



Its over
done with
you have left me
now I am all alone
You won't speak me me
Goddamnit just talk to me
I need to see you words on the screen
I would love to hear your voice
but i can't you left me
Its taken me ten months to jusify you
then you drop me in an hour
your mind has changed
you don't feel right about it
how the hell do you think i feel
how did i let you think i was a toy
that you could just use me and play with me like that
i am worth so much more then you will ever understand
more then i will ever understand
you have corrupted me
I dont know myself
I lost myself a long time ago
you forgave me
you haven't once asked for my forgiveness
dont you feel bad? dirty? wrong?
don't you feel sorry for me and what you have created
i have a void in my soul, my heart
that will never be filled
i gave up so much for you
time and energy
and i have nothing to show for it
its all still a secret
i still hold it all in
no one knows
isnt that the way you wanted it?
now i have to dwell in it on my own
now its tearing me apart
i can't sleep or eat
i need to be healed in a way you can't understand
you were my prince charming.
the one i thought would carry me away
you were
you did
and then you failed
no, i failed you
i should have stood up for what i knew
but i dragged you down
i let you do this to me
i failed
now its all over


YAY its over...i think no more sad poetry or ranting about this guy. now only sad ranting and poetry and how i am going to find myself and myself worth in this world of pain and confusion

I can't be your superman

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Jezzika
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since 2005-01-05
Posts 154
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1 posted 2005-01-07 06:41 PM


Wow!! This was intense.  It was great!! I liked it very much!

Jezzika

you know he really wants me

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