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Teen Poetry #7

the stillness of pain

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2004-12-26 11:28 PM

this is something i wrote a little while ago...and i really like it. thats a first. so neways, on to the poem...

a broken heart is perhaps the most beautiful thing
that can be seen
because it shows true pain at its best
and it allows you
to see someone with their guard down
and they don't have to pretend
it lets you see tears that fall
and gives you the chance to take them away
as well as cause more
it makes you realize that your meant to be
with that person
because you know that there's more
than just a pretty face behind a mask
and you know there is nothing more beautiful
than someone crying over you
just because they love you
when you see this
it makes you think twice
about turning around and leaving again
and maybe the most precious thing about it all is
that even though you caused it
you could be the one to put it all back together again

*i would love your thoughts on this....and thanks for reading*

<3
ri

no matter what i'll always love you
i swear

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2004-12-27 11:49 PM

Why does this not have comments?!! Grr.
Anyways, I really liked this alot. I liked the different perspective about broken hearts. It flowed together nicely, and had good sentiments.
Thanks for sharing.

But Im comforted
by the fact that I can hurt inside
all I want to
without anyone ever knowing
~WinterWren~

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

2 posted 2005-01-06 11:48 AM

"that even though you caused it
you could be the one to put it all back together again"

I loved this part. This was a great poem!!!!!!!!! Awesome

Jezzika

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