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Strider612
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since 2003-12-21
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Alabama, United States of America

0 posted 2004-12-16 11:03 AM



I was in the falling raindrops
Wanting shelter from the storm,
Surrounded by the lightning,
Seeking refuge safe and warm.
In the middle of my wanderings,
You found and rescued me.
You’ve saved me from the darkness;
Now at last the good I see.

Feel the rain--it cannot drown me.
Hear the thunder--it cannot harm.
See the clouds--they cannot scare me
Now that I have you in my arms.

The winds that blew around me
Kept my feet from steady ground,
But now love's pull will hold me
To the solid land I’ve found.
And the rain that fell around me
Made it hard for me to fight,
But now I have a shield in you
Whether storms come day or night.

Feel the rain--it cannot drown me.
Hear the thunder--it cannot harm.
See the clouds--they cannot scare me
Now that I have you in my arms.

You’ve kept the storm from beating me
By making me complete.
I can face the world’s worst pain with you
As rain falls down in sheets.

Feel the rain--it cannot drown me.
Hear the thunder--it cannot harm.
See the clouds--they cannot scare me
Now that I have you in my arms.

See the lightning flash so near me,
But I’m protected by your charms.
The storm can’t overtake me
Now that I have you in my arms.

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*Alli4000*
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1 posted 2004-12-16 06:34 PM


I guess this is suppost to be a song right? I like it.  This was my favorite part:

"Feel the rain--it cannot drown me.
Hear the thunder--it cannot harm.
See the clouds--they cannot scare me
Now that I have you in my arms."


Great write...thanks for sharing!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

tapper798
Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world
2 posted 2004-12-16 07:50 PM


The winds that blew around me
Kept my feet from steady ground,
But now love's pull will hold me
To the solid land I’ve found.
And the rain that fell around me
Made it hard for me to fight,
But now I have a shield in you
Whether storms come day or night.

Feel the rain--it cannot drown me.
Hear the thunder--it cannot harm.
See the clouds--they cannot scare me
Now that I have you in my arms.

I loved that part. I really loved this! I'm gonna keep it if you don't mind!

AIM-blueyed angel940
One day u'll ask which is more important,u or my life. I'll answer my life and u'll walk away never knowing u are my life.

silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-12-16 08:44 PM


this was great.
liked it a lot

LOR

you're the only one keeping me alive

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