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WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

0 posted 2004-12-10 08:19 PM

I’m gonna make your life miserable
Just like you did to mine
Broke down all of my feelings
So I couldn’t speak

I wanted to yell
And I wanted to shout
But my mouth had gone mute
As much as I hate you
I didn’t want to hurt you

And I knew that’s what
I’d do
As short as we were friends
I told you all my secrets
And asked you not to tell

How could you be so selfish?
And so self-centered?
Your voice felt like a splinter,
Piercing each & every finger!

A week has gone by
Since I said those “hateful” words to you
And we haven’t spoken, not one sound,
Until this is what I heard:

“It’s all my fault,
And I don’t know how to say it,
But I want our friendship back!”

I don’t know if I want that,
Are you just gonna stab me in the back?
Say it was a simple hat trick?

I trusted you before,
And up until now, you never broke that bond,
So I guess I’ll take a chance
And see what this friendship still has

Two weeks have past,
Since we have gone back,
And you finally asked:
“You wanna come over tonight?”
This isn't my best, but its new!
Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-12-10 08:24 PM

Omg Bailey! I love this (haha i just told u this like what, 2 minutes ago?). But seriously, i bet you get like 15 replies to this! This poem rocks! I'm adding it to my poem book.
Everyone who reads this: REPLY!

Your the best Bailey!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

2 posted 2004-12-10 08:27 PM

Thanks Alli!!!! But I don't think its THAT good! Lol, the last poem I wrote that u said ROCKED only got 4 replies, n I think 1 of 'em was mine..... so I dunno....

Bailey
P.S. The other one was "Us (not what you think)"

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

3 posted 2004-12-10 09:52 PM

Your voice felt like a splinter,
Piercing each & every finger!

i loved this it "rocks" hee hee good write

WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

4 posted 2004-12-11 03:29 AM

Thanks! That was my favorite part too! Glad you liked it!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

red_angel*16
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 71

5 posted 2004-12-11 04:32 AM

bailey i can really relate to this.
i also had a frend that i thought i could trust. i told her everything because i thought i knew her well.
then one day she started telling everyone about my secrets. but the only thing is that we never became frends again.
i think this is one of the best poem i read from you
so thanks for sharing
keep posting!!!!!!!!!

always christine

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

6 posted 2004-12-11 04:34 AM

Hey Bailey, Love the poem. Its also nice to meet you. I totally get where you are coming from and I know the feeling.

-Kellie

WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

7 posted 2004-12-11 11:44 PM

Thanks guys! Aprecciate the comments!

Nice to meet you too Kellie!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

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