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~DreamChild~
Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-09 12:22 PM



once...

was a captive.

made
     into
          a slave;


mastered by time...

bound
        to
           the grave.


now...

    wild and free

    without a care

    dancing through life

    with no time
                
    to spare.

~ the stuff dreams are made of ~
          

© Copyright 2004 derrick gillum - All Rights Reserved
tearsoflove13762
Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
1 posted 2004-12-09 05:49 PM


one thing that i enjoy most about this is that it is not about a love story or heart break ... i like those too and that is mainly what i write but i like this... im suprised no one has commented yet
WranglrButts9
Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108
Iowa, US
2 posted 2004-12-10 07:37 PM


Dream: That was awesome! Expresses pretty much your life and what its like from childhood and being controlled by your parents, to living life on your own! I loved it!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

~DreamChild~
Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams
3 posted 2004-12-10 11:22 PM


thanks wrangler!
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