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Teen Poetry #7

Pretending

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-08 02:37 PM

The love
and affection;
unfound.

The pain
and the strife
abound.

The fear
and the worry;
unending.

The smiles
and the laughter:
pretending.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-12-08 08:57 PM

ohhh..i love this..it was short, but sooooo good.Im adding.
Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

2 posted 2004-12-09 12:06 PM

wow yes it was short but long enough to get the point through thanks for sharing!i am adding as well

WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

3 posted 2004-12-10 07:40 PM

I always love your writing and this is no different. Everything you write is right to the point! love it!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

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