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Xeonox
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0 posted 2004-12-06 11:18 PM



You know what is love,
Without two hearts entwine,
Desperation-

What one thought-
The other felt,
And yet fissures appeared…

Two lives, became one,
For an instance of time,
Reality faded into fantasy,

Coldness crept in-
Trust misplaced,
Lust within,

One bite from the fruit,
And all was lost,
Lovers left hastily-

Heaven wept night and day,
For each of them knew,
This was all just a dream

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2004 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
HopelessRomanticGuy
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1 posted 2004-12-07 09:34 AM


Wow, an interesting style I'm not familiar with.  Very well enjoyed!  Kinda sums up the past year and a half of my life, so I think I'm keeping this in my library!  BTW, nice signature!  
                                -Rich


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"Photograph"
12 Stones
Potter's Field

"I'm burning in the heavens,
and I'm drowning in a hell.
And my soul is in a coma
and none of my friends can tell,"
  ~Take Me~ Papa Roach

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2 posted 2004-12-10 07:25 PM


Very good write XeonoX! You need to post some more poems real soon!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
3 posted 2004-12-11 08:02 PM


wow, this was pretty good.
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