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Teen Poetry #7

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tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2004-12-05 10:01 PM

i have not been in these forums for a while i hav had alot goin on with school and work so here is what i have written while i was busy.
It is funny how one four letter word can describe my love for you
                   Dead
It is obsurd how three little words can cause so much pain
                I love you
It was honesty that came out of your mouth when you stated three commanding words
                 Dont love me
And it is honesty today as I utter back two acute words
                    I dont

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2004-12-05 10:50 PM

Well, for something written only in spare time, this is awesome. Short, but length seldom has any relation to meaning. I spend up to a day or two on poems, and even then they don't always come out so clear. Talented. Very much so.

-Rich

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"I'm burning in the heavens,
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Savage Quiescence
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since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

2 posted 2004-12-06 08:09 PM

An unusual but surprisingly powerful piece. Interesting, thanks for sharing.

*Alli4000*