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Teen Poetry #7

change.

electricxheart
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

0 posted 2004-12-02 07:12 PM

change; i know it sleeps in my heart.
i’ve felt it rush out through my eyes;
the changes in your soul, the changes
of the sky. for i am a observer, and i
choose to see everything through my
tinted/boxed in/camera lens.

click, snap. i’ve saved you away. i’ve
saved the highway, saved the moon,
the stars.

pictures line my life. they tell me what
it’s like before the sea sweeps everything
away.

remember to breathe after you exhale.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-12-02 10:35 PM

"change; i know it sleeps in my heart.
i’ve felt it rush out through my eyes;
the changes in your soul, the changes
of the sky. for i am a observer, and i
choose to see everything through my
tinted/boxed in/camera lens."

Loved that beginning part...awesome write!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2004-12-04 12:53 PM

this is damn cool, i love the last line. good stuff. you're one of my favorite poets here.

bergundy

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

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