Mooring Lines and Sea-Weathered Knuckles

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Teen Poetry #7

Mooring Lines and Sea-Weathered Knuckles

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

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Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-12-01 12:12 PM

Mooring Lines and Sea-Weathered Knuckles

Drip yourself onto me,
let me feel submerged in your touch.
Steal my air and leave my conscious mind
stranded on islands with unclothed natives,
they smile at my discomfort.
Oh to swim in your skin,
losing sight in the darkness
only to find that I was headed to the deep.
I am amazed by curves opposite your back,
they beckon me to gaze as if to tell a fortune lost,
but even your palms have no lines to follow into tomorrow.
Grasp the guide and remember to hold on tight,
this ride moves quickly into the night and on through
the unknown behind intentions.
Cling to my hand love, cling to my plan...

Savage Quiescence
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since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

1 posted 2004-12-01 04:34 PM

I like this one. Very visual. I'm especially fond of the line, "but even your palms have no lines to follow into tomorrow." Good write, thanks for sharing.

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2004-12-01 11:58 PM

thanks a lot for reading.

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

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Sparks, NV

3 posted 2004-12-02 10:52 AM

"Cling to my hand love, cling to my plan.."

oh i jsut loved that last line. great poem hun.
robin

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young_blood
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Indianapolis, IN

4 posted 2004-12-02 12:38 PM

thanks robin

~DreamChild~
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5 posted 2004-12-02 01:35 PM

long time no see young un.
good post.

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

6 posted 2004-12-06 04:59 PM

thanks for reading.

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