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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-28 10:40 PM


how my lust does
kindle,
and my passions do
arouse.
who will feel
the warmest kiss
that's ever
touched her mouth.

oh who will light my
"tinder" heart
and set my soul
aflame
by fire-light,
and silent sighs
breathing out my name

should she be
my lover?
should she be
my friend?
should we start this new
relationship?
and what if it should
end?

whatever brings
the morning with,
tomorrow, take your time.
shall we dare?
oh yes let us share.
so much more
than just words,
and rhymes...

~ the stuff dreams are made of ~
          

© Copyright 2004 derrick gillum - All Rights Reserved
Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
1 posted 2004-11-29 12:49 PM


Very delicate and sweet. I bet all the girls are swooning and hoping that your crush might be them. I hope you reveil your poet crush soon.
HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
2 posted 2004-11-29 01:11 PM


I'd take a guess, but:
1) I'd probably be so wrong I had to put my foot in my mouth,
2)I don't want to end the game before you're done.

"I'm burning in the heavens,
and I'm drowning in a hell.
And my soul is in a coma
and none of my friends can tell,"
  ~Take Me~ Papa Roach

~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
3 posted 2004-11-29 02:37 PM


by all means, please do guess, rich.

Christioned
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since 2004-01-15
Posts 93
Huddling in the dark
4 posted 2004-11-29 04:26 PM


After reading all of this little game not to mention you're replys to and from Allison. I'd say that's who it is. However, this is you're game and a well played one.
Andi

"We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing"

*Alli4000*
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5 posted 2004-11-29 08:01 PM


I don't know...lol...I think it might be Kellie.

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

SEA
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with you
6 posted 2004-11-29 11:45 PM


well, I know it can't be me LOL I'm married so when do we find out who the lucky girl is?
red_angel*16
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since 2004-09-04
Posts 71

7 posted 2004-11-30 04:54 AM


i like this one.
ummm... i'm just gonna guess who's
ur crush .i think its Alli...
if I'm wrong then i dont know

always christine

punkrockerrobin
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8 posted 2004-12-01 07:26 AM


IT'S ME!!!
haha just playin. i had a poet crush. actually a few. but they always ended up disasterous. lets see ti,jimmy,and a romanatic but that's ok i got my man now. anyways......... i know who it is hehehehehe i is edumacated lol!
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
9 posted 2004-12-11 02:00 PM


SEA- I wish it wasn't me.

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