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Teen Poetry #7

My "pips"

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-27 12:32 PM

ere' body
in the house
jump,
jump
for joy.
put ya hands
in the air
nod ya head,
and make
some noise.

got mad flows
bumpin.
all my "pips"
are tight.
got rhymes,
sublime lines.
p.-i.-p.
set it off right.

im so proud to see
these pippers
representing themselves;
re -veal- ing
so free-ly
the inner-being
that dwells

in the heart
of the poet,
with the power
of words.

showin love
to peeps
at passions.

let your voices
be heard.

~sweet dreams~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2004-11-27 02:26 PM

nicely done

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-11-27 02:55 PM

What Sea said....

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2004-11-27 04:02 PM

just a little word play. i like rap for all the rhymes.

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

4 posted 2004-11-27 06:03 PM

Silly.. But fun Thanks dream I liked.

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

5 posted 2004-11-28 01:10 AM

did you really?
im usually more serious,
but this was fun to write!

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

6 posted 2004-11-28 01:54 AM

Well done

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