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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-26 12:33 PM


oh how sweet.
u make me blush.
and make me tweak,
what a rush.

such friendly smiles
you like me too
you cant deny it,
you know you do!

~sweet dreams~
          

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red_angel*16
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1 posted 2004-11-26 04:14 AM


dreamchild this is such a sweeet poem and i like it alot
its short but sweet.
so who's the crush if you dont mind me asking


always christine

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2 posted 2004-11-26 02:40 PM


So who is it!   lol...

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HopelessRomanticGuy
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3 posted 2004-11-27 02:00 AM


Heh.  Gotta say, man, you've got more of, well, something, than I, because you have no idea how many times I'd wussed out when pondering doing a thing like this...    Speaking of which, where HAS my crush been been...?     Good luck to you!  


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Kellie_Cantrell
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4 posted 2004-11-27 06:04 PM


He is so cute and such a romantic.. I wish more guys were like him... so poetic and perfect.
~DreamChild~
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5 posted 2004-11-28 01:12 AM


wow, im flattered. that was very sweet.
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