This is short and simple just like our love affair..

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Teen Poetry #7

This is short and simple just like our love affair..

Sweetest Sorrow X
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since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

0 posted 2004-11-24 11:48 PM

I laid on the concrete.
Mind blurry.
But I was still only thinking of you.

No matter what.

She would rather be dead than fat,
Dead and perfect, like Nefertiti

electricxheart
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

1 posted 2004-11-25 01:01 PM

aw, i love it!

so short but so pretty.

-kelly

remember to breathe after you exhale.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-11-25 08:33 PM

OMG! LOVE THIS! First short poem i've seen you written (i think

) and I liked!

~Alli~

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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2004-11-25 11:20 PM

hey this was really awesome! i love shorts,
and this one was dynamite in small packaging.

"from the cradle to the casket"
is that original?
very catchy.

red_angel*16
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since 2004-09-04

Posts 71

4 posted 2004-11-26 05:46 AM

cute poem, keep posting

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

5 posted 2004-11-26 06:13 AM

Great writing SSX, I really enjoyed the read

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