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yankees01rugby Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48USA |
just wrote my feeling after my rugby game tonight and my parents left without saying anything to me. havent made improvements yet open to suggestions. Last game of season Talked about for weeks gonna be the best game ever and its finally here Under the lights for the first time EVER! Pregame practice is great except one person doesnt really care Parents actually manage to show, heh. 'best friend' too Friend screams at the top of her lungs to me dont care...down by ALOT Family stays silent Do they want to be here? Half time and half dead heart pounds almost ripping open my chest Trying with all the might in my bruised and scared body to come from 30 points behind. Second half, half second wind only thoughts are on the try line 50 meters away havent seen it in 30 minutes getting pounded left and right on the ground each time all rage going to the legs legs that must hit hit as hard as the body will allow not good enough body meets the ground again more pissed everytime my head smacks the ground knocks every play mind tells me to quit cant, too pissed to care Last play and its over the game, the season the only thing i have. lost 39 to 5 like it was our first time on the field shake hands-good game Sure, whatever Tryed my hardest, everything i had the stands empty now Parents? they were here? Equiptment away for the winter may not see the field in the spring. So parents? not in the stands, not on field, not by gate, no more cars, everyones gone, standing alone me and the field they left without even a 'good game' the tears pierce my eyes like razors Should have known But they actually came this time. its all done, over the game, the season, only thing i have. its all done, over, trust, care, love done, gone no more, LOST! "What your mind believes, your body will achieve. Its time to start believing." |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hey. this one is good when you mention yourself alone on the field after everyone left, you meant that in an artistic sense, and not in a literal one, right? I think thats very cool. You could take it further with this concept. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Aww...kind of depressing to read this. I hope things have been going better with your parents...  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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