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Gottigirl505
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0 posted 2006-02-08 05:53 PM


You left me all alone,
I wasn’t even three,
I’m your flesh and blood,
Why don’t you love me?



You never call to say hi,
Or even on holidays,
All I did was sigh,
On my birthday the month after may



Now I sit here in my home,
With my husband and my child,
Dreaming of the father of my own,
And how your love for me was mild.



“Your better off without him” everybody tells me,
But they don’t know you like I do,
They don’t see what I see,
Cause I see a man that needs to get a clue.



You’re my father,
No doubting that,
But now you’re just a bother.
And you’re thrown out like an unwanted cat.

© Copyright 2006 Kandice Smith - All Rights Reserved
Marshalzu
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1 posted 2006-02-08 06:00 PM


Welcome to Passions.

This is a very powerful and interesting first post, I’m looking forward to reading more of your writing

Andrew

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2 posted 2006-02-10 10:14 PM


Great Job!!! Welcome to PIP!!! I loved this poem sooo much! Hope to hear more of yours in the future-

XoXo,
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3 posted 2006-03-09 02:35 PM


Welcome to pip!how is the weather in Mexico?
Great first post. very nice.

           Jessica    
            
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

stargal
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4 posted 2006-03-10 06:30 PM


Yow! Nice post! Love the poem, i can so relate to it!

Keep postin' would love to see more

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helenadepp
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5 posted 2006-03-11 01:48 PM


This was interesting. I felt that it flowed well until the last stanza, maybe thats just me though? Anyways nice write!
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6 posted 2006-03-17 07:17 PM


Very nice first post.  Welcome to Pip!

~Alli~

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