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Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

0 posted 2004-11-21 04:13 PM

"Summer has treated us well."
as you took a sip. And it has, to say the least. We sat in your garage rolling joints and smoking one after another; after another for the remainder of the night. I sat in the purple chair you claimed to be my own, and you played that acoustic guitar for me. Minutes seemed like hours and our night never ended. And for the second time in my life, I felt connected and relaxed. And you; my pre-school friend; the boy I've grown up with; the boy I found myself within- Where are you? You gave up your bed for me, as you slept on the floor singing The Getup Kids, for me, all for me...
With my eyes barely opened in the morning, I heard you yawn and stretch your arms behind your head and completely fall onto the carpet. With the sun beaming rays of light onto your face...
Were all scared of change.

We made eachother breakfast and I was on my way out, just when I ran inside to wrap my arms around you, and we both thanked each other for the company we shared...
Within this month alone, life has changed; so have we. I quit smoking, and today I was put on probation for a year. And facing the consequences is something I’m willing to do. And I just hope, [with the everything I'm currently able to hold] that we come in contact once again, Should I give you a call tonight?

and everynight, I think of you and I manage to ly myself back down again.
and again
and again
and again
and again

and again.

I choose my company by the beating of their hearts

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2004-11-21 09:36 PM

wow.
such honesty in writing.
it sometimes feels like the only truth.
take care...
your talented
very.

Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

2 posted 2004-11-21 10:29 PM

thank you sooo much that feels so good.

She would rather be dead than fat,
Dead and perfect, like Nefertiti

Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

3 posted 2004-11-21 10:30 PM

thank you sooo much that feels so good.

She would rather be dead than fat,
Dead and perfect, like Nefertiti

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

4 posted 2004-11-22 10:46 PM

This was awesome. Great work and an amazing way to get your feelings out, of course! I like how it twisted around. Good job! ~Jess

"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return" -Moulin Rouge

electricxheart
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

5 posted 2004-11-24 12:39 PM

this speaks a lot of truth. and it
seems that you manage that in all
of your poetry, something that i'm
hoping i'll be able to accomplish
some day.

your writing is a true inspiration
to me.