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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-21 03:30 AM



touch:

impression
indescribable

sense it...

tingling,
flowing,
flesh

sporatic
excitement

warmth:

felt...

pulsing,
pumping,
pounding

a call...
a plea...

kiss me,
hold me,
closer,
warmer

breathe...

feel.

touch.



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1 posted 2004-11-21 11:01 AM


I sent you an email regarding this. Please check your email. You are not allowed to post the same poem in open and in teen. I am closing this once AGAIN. Here is what the Pip guidelines say about cross posting. I suggest you read it!

"Cross-Posting

Cross-posting is defined as posting the same poem or story in multiple forums within a short time span. This is an unnecessary strain on our resources and is generally discouraged. Please don't post a poem in The Corner Pub, then post the same poem in Open a day or two later. If you decide you posted in the wrong forum, ask one of the Moderators to move it for you.

The exception to this rule centers on our Workshops, whether the Poetry Workshop or the Critical Analysis forum (or any future forum where the intent is to improve upon a work). It is perfectly acceptable to use the workshops to fine-tune a poem prior to posting in another, more open, forum. It is also okay to bring back a poem previously posted, but now sitting in an Archive (to be courteous, the title should include a note indicating it is a repost, so those who have already read it will have the opportunity to read something else instead)."

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