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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
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in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-18 03:02 AM


oh Lord of my fathers;

my sovereign King;

throughout heaven and earth
let your praises ring!

oh Savior
have mercy,

oh great El shaddai,

shed light on the darkness
that vexes my mind

oh Teacher of life;

wise mens' Master,

please spare my feet
from the paths of disaster

teach me your knowledge,
the wisdom of old.
for this i desire
more than silver and gold.

more priceless than diamonds;
more rare than pure love:

your divine revelation on the wings of a dove.

" Now what do you THINK about that? "
          

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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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New York
1 posted 2004-11-18 12:51 PM


I love this poem, good job It would make a great post to post in spiritual too.

Smile

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2 posted 2004-11-18 10:25 PM


this should go in spritual posts to give them a smile
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
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