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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2004-11-18 12:11 PM



There's a certain slant of light,
that enters the room between the blades of the blinds.
It dances upon the table tops,
casting shadows upon the walls.
Seeping into the darkened room,
illuminating our private embrace.
Steady, clinging to our bodies,
our shadows on the floor.
A beauty, stands in the spotlight,
cast by a slant of light.

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1 posted 2004-11-18 12:41 PM


enjoyed this very much!
Kellie_Cantrell
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2 posted 2004-11-18 01:35 AM


SEA- Thank you For reading!
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3 posted 2004-11-18 02:13 AM


once again, a lovely post!
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4 posted 2004-11-18 05:20 PM


Kellie...love this poem!

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5 posted 2004-11-18 10:16 PM


short use of words but lovely.
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