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tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2004-11-17 08:01 PM

Wow...it's been forever since I've posted here! Well, yeah wrote this song and I'm not sure how good it is but just let me know what you think! Sorry I haven't been around much, I'm gonna try and come around more often, I love this site!

Beautiful Disaster

Vs. 1

I’m the snow falling on a sunny spring day
And the rain pouring, painting the sky in gray.
I’m a beautiful disaster…and you’re my dream come true.

I’m the sparkle that lives in your eyes,
The one that match the stars of the night sky.
I’m a beautiful disaster…and I need you.

CHORUS

I want to be YOUR beautiful disaster,
Living life as it was meant to be.
I want to live loving you like you deserve
I want it to be just you and me.

I’m a beautiful disaster…and you’re my dream come true.

VS. 2

The snow will eventually melt, the clouds…eventually part,
And love might last a lifetime, but it eventually breaks your heart.
Loves a beautiful disaster…but I’m willing to take the chance.

I want to be YOUR beautiful disaster,
Living life as it was meant to be.
I want to live loving you like you deserve
I want it to be just you and me.

I’m your beautiful disaster…and I need you to be true.

BRIDGE

I might not be perfect, but baby I need you, with all my heart I do.
I want to be yours…your disaster, and I’ll be beautiful for you.

I want to be YOUR beautiful disaster,
Living life as it was meant to be.
I want to live loving you like you deserve
I want it to be just you and me.
Just you and me…
You and me….

-Erin

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-11-17 09:09 PM

Omg Erin..awesome! Just like always!

All you need now is the band to play it with you...lol...and I would buy your album in like a sec.

Like I said, amazing. Glad you're back!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

2 posted 2004-11-18 02:21 AM

i think this is a beautiful poem,
but i hear no song.

so...

sing it to me!

lol

" Now what do you THINK about that? "

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

3 posted 2004-11-18 12:56 PM

I love it.. could be the next big song hittin' our radio waves. I enjoyed it I got the beat and I belted out the lyrics. I love it, I got caught up in the moment.

I love the beauty that is captured by the lyrics and the way it painted a picture in my mind. Beautiful Work Erin

Smile

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2004-11-18 10:24 PM

awesome stuff! i loved it if only i could hear it to music.
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr

Mysilentsaviour25
Junior Member

since 2006-04-10

Posts 12
California

5 posted 2006-04-10 04:19 PM

Just as i said to young_blood, ive read a lot of your stuff, and i like it a lot. Keep it up, i want to read more! Email me if you get the chance, loveandbasketball2320@yahoo.com or hesmysilentsaviour@yahoo.com

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