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0 posted 2004-11-17 01:33 PM



your love is true
but your choices were false,

you claim to love
but you were lost

you gave and gave
hoping for the same,

but in the end
you were left feeling drained,

yet you chose not to give in,
looking for a love that will gleam

your heart and soul,
will finally feel whole

when the love of your life,
fills your soul.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2004 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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in your dreams
1 posted 2004-11-18 02:38 AM


lol! i like your signature!  

good post too.


   ~freedom is the dream of a sleeping reality~
                      

punkrockerrobin
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2 posted 2004-11-18 10:29 PM


cute poem i liked it.
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
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