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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-17 12:40 PM


the days march on
they always do.

the time they mark
i'm marching too.

should the ranks break,
in the files found fault...

Call to attention!

Company!

Hault!





  



" Now what do you THINK about that? "
          

[This message has been edited by ~DreamChild~ (11-18-2004 02:43 AM).]

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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
1 posted 2004-11-17 01:27 PM


edited for better impact!


WranglrButts9
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since 2004-10-24
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Iowa, US
2 posted 2004-11-17 07:19 PM


Wow! Awesome!!! Thats all I can say- seriously!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

~DreamChild~
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3 posted 2004-11-18 02:44 AM


thanks man.
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4 posted 2004-11-19 08:05 AM


interesting lil piece. nicely done

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
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