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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2004-11-17 12:46 PM



I'm gonna dive off this bridge and fly,
far, far, far away from here.
Standing where the sun shines all day,
and darkness calls at night.

Fly Fly Fly away,
up into my destiny.
I see you there,
my Prince, my Peace,
and pretty shining armor.

I'm gonna dance, dance the night away,
waltzing across the floor.
Where forever stands alone,
and all my fears take flight.

© Copyright 2004 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
HopelessRomanticGuy
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1 posted 2004-11-17 01:00 AM


[QUOTE]Where forever stands alone,
and all my fears take flight.[QUOTE]

My favorite two lines in this poem, possibly my favorite quote ever.  Perfect ending to this poem, I think.  Keep it UP !

[center]"I'm burning in the heavens,
and I'm drowning in a hell.
And my soul is in a coma
and none of my friends can tell,"
[i]~Take Me~ Papa Roca

~DreamChild~
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Posts 544
in your dreams
2 posted 2004-11-17 01:19 AM


"Are your tears in need of drying?
Is your heart in need of love?
The kind you just can never find,
Heaven-sent from up above

Carried down on angels' wings
Whispered in songs the ocean sings

Feels like the warmth of sweet sunshine
And gets sweeter with age, like strawberry wine

Rides to your rescue on a galloping horse
And leaves you breathless, longing for more...

You know where to find it,
You know where I'll be,
Remember my love,
and Think of me..."


" Now what do you THINK about that? "
          

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3 posted 2004-11-17 07:23 PM


"I'm gonna dance, dance the night away,
waltzing across the floor.
Where forever stands alone,
and all my fears take flight."


omg! I love this...especially this last stanza! Awesome job!!

~Alli~

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4 posted 2004-11-19 08:13 AM


wow this is amazing hun. great right!
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
5 posted 2004-11-19 12:59 PM


All of you provided such sweet responses. I am glad that you all enjoyed this piece.

With love,
Kellie

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