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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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A hug and a kiss, wander near to me. I'm waiting, your charming. A hug and a kiss, here for you, I'm waiting, your charming. My Prince, my shining armor, I'm still locked in this tower, awaiting your rescue. My Prince, my shining armor, I'm still locked in this tower, awaiting your kiss. |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Wow..... There's no contest. You're ability to write as a hopeless romantic far exeeds mine. This was a truly beautiful poem. Short and sweet, yet much enjoyed (and envied!). Fell in love with this poem the first time over. Just.... perfect. [center]"I'm burning in the heavens, |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
upon the winds ride pleas of passion... calling. i grow near... i will claim the kisses promised... shes waiting for me here. " Now what do you THINK about that? " |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
love this kellie...and your "critique message" too.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
nice one  robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt! |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Hopeless- Your funny. Thanks. Dream- Whats up.. It's beginning to look a lot like christmas. Robin- Thank You. Alli- Thanks. I'm trying to think of a new one. |
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