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Kellie_Cantrell
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New York

0 posted 2004-11-17 12:45 PM


Beauty, arms open wide.
An evergreen tree in the snow.
       I reach to you,
       I wonder about you.
A gentle embrace
dysfunctional being, a love,
        Lost in the mist,
        will you become found?
A leap of faith,
for you and I.

© Copyright 2004 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
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1 posted 2004-11-17 12:57 PM


Wow!  I really like this one.  Feeling the same way, I am more and more often than not.  Trying  to fight the feeling, and failing miserably am I.  And yet, I'm much too afraid of being hurt again to take that leap of faith.  Alas, it's always a risk.

[center]"I'm burning in the heavens,
and I'm drowning in a hell.
And my soul is in a coma
and none of my friends can tell,"
[i]~Take Me~ Papa Roca

~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
2 posted 2004-11-17 01:22 AM


so  fair is the evergreen,  
bold againt the snow...

beautiful poem indeed.

" Now what do you THINK about that? "
          

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3 posted 2004-11-19 08:16 AM


this one was purdy i really liked it.
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr

Kellie_Cantrell
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New York
4 posted 2004-11-19 12:52 PM


Hopeless- am I really a hopeless romantic? I'd like to think that I am not.

Dream-You are such a sweetie...

Robin- Thank You.

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