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0 posted 2004-11-15 04:09 AM


goodbye to the day i once knew
hello to the darkness i now call home
alone and no one to call my own
scared and on my own

in the shadows i see what i now know
when the light seeps in
i see what i once knew and lost
goodbye to it all

i see what could of have been
and what has become
i see the light no longer
and into the shadows i go

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

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1 posted 2004-11-15 08:22 AM


Great writing Robin

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2 posted 2004-11-15 05:57 PM


"goodbye to the day i once knew
hello to the darkness i now call home
alone and no one to call my own
scared and on my own"


Like that part...very emotional write...enjoyed~

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3 posted 2004-11-15 09:27 PM


I enjoyed this, I can relate to the feelings expressed. Smile everythings going to be alright Smile
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4 posted 2004-11-16 11:54 AM


thanks you guys
awwwwwww zu i heart you.

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

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