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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams 
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the day is new; so a smile for you and cheer and laughter galore but below the surface deep down in my heart there is always so much more more than just smiles and joy and cheer there's sadness and pain confusion and fear so don't always assume that one's life is all well what you see on the outside is not enough to tell there's always more than meets the eye hidden from view deep down inside ~Express Yourself~ |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is beautiful dream.... well written and soooooo true..... well done i love it.. Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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earthdust Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 53predestined and foreknown |
thx again! " Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. " |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
i like this... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
so much truth in this poem. "so don't always assume that one's life is all well what you see on the outside is not enough to tell" i really liked that part. it's so true. people hardly realize it anymore. robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt! |
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