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no god at all |
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earthdust Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 53predestined and foreknown |
your head is swollen with prideful imaginations, and the air of conceit drains to your steadily upward-spiraling nostrils. how is it that you can look down upon the world from your pinnacle so very high above us all, as if you were a god? no god at all, but a mere creator of simple things that you admire with such undeserved adoration... are you so blind ? alas... the wall of arrogance has mounted high , and wide. neither troop nor brigade shall scale to the exceeding high tower of foolishness wherein you dwell. let us hope that the heavens do not cast you down, and tumble the mighty fortress you have built. what will you do, almighty creator of insignificant things, when the infinite cycle of truth rolls over you with the unstoppable momentum of its revolution? ha... no god at all, but a mere creator of, simple, finite, and insignificant vanity. " Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. " |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
well done. good expression. i'm not sure if i share the same ideas that were expressed in this, but you did a good job staying away from the cliche. |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
oooh... i like this! good job! Freedom is the dream of sleeping reality. |
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