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Teen Poetry #7

the fallen lover

red_angel*16
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 71

0 posted 2004-11-09 04:27 AM

Someone specialb used to be at my side
he made me show feelings that I always hide
I always thought our love is strong
but what I thought was wrong

He told me off then said it was through
he topped it of by sayin
I'd rather be friends with you,
I went to my friends to feel comforted and loved
but they said certain things and I just felt shoved

Now I cant seem to find my place
everything I had has been erased
gone without a trace
lost somewhere in space

with out you, your light,and your love in my life
I always feel like I wanna cry...

I'm tired of this (edit by moderator) and I'm tired of you
and all this (edit by moderator) your making me go through
this is it, this is my permanent good bye
you can just stand in
da corner and watch me cry all these tears out...

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

1 posted 2004-11-13 09:00 PM

i sense the emotion put into this.

~Express Yourself~

red_angel*16
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 71

2 posted 2004-11-22 06:44 AM

thanks dream child for your replys !!!

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