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the Hood Cry
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the Hood Cry |
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AtLsHawTy17 Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 60IL, |
The hood cry can be heard if you open your heart a listen to each word the hood cry you may not be able to hear because you ride through it with the doors lock trying to hide all your fears the hood cry only wants to be understood but no one can understand it unless you grew up in the hood the hood cry it is screaming for you to care but you just dont listen you just wont dare the hood cry to many lives to touch the stories are too many and the loss is just too much the hood cry you just cant say its all fine b/c you see over there they all have to walk around carrying a nine Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
aw hell-to-da-yea, that was a tight lil freestyle loop... tha hood cry. ill keep an eye out for ya first spin! lol ~Express Yourself~ |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
very artistic... ~Express Yourself~ |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
awesome stuff got your own lil flow going :0) hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very interesting poem.  Enjoyed~ ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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