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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
even though you and I are apart I think of you more than usuall remembering the fun we used to share It's just hard to believe were not together anymore everyday i feel like I'm constantly hurting my own feelings cause the more i try to forget you the more i miss you now i count the days of how long you've been out of my life cause I know some day we'll finally meet and when that day comes I'll never let go of you cause i know I'll still be loving you so... |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Hmm.... a title. How about "Still Loving You" ? Just a thought. I'm sure with all the creative people arond here, we'll come up with something. *smiles* Someone after my own heart with this one! I can sympathize with this one, though I'd deny those last 2 lines until the day I die! I'm sorry you're feeling that way, though. It'll get better, and maybe you will meet them again, and maybe not. Just remember, if it's meant to be, then it will find a way. -Rich Winamp is Playing: "Hover" TrustCompany The Lonely Position Of Neutral is knowing where I've been ~Rich~ |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
beautiful poem and exactly what i needed to read.... im going thru the exact same thing right now... only that we are 'friends' for now..... it is the hardest thing i have ever done... you have an amazing talent of writing your emotions down in such a way that its as if your detactched from the actual event... but yet connected still by some invisible thread..... things do get easier tho... just give it time keep the writing coming.. Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"the more i miss you now i count the days of how long you've been out of my life cause I know some day we'll finally meet and when that day comes I'll never let go of you" Liked that part.. I can relate to your poem too...good write!  ~Alli~ BTW, I really suck with titles too, but I like Rich's suggestion. *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
thanks for your replys and suggestion. I tried to change the title of this poem to "still loving you," just like Rich said but when i tried to edit it it said go to the moderator for help.But thanks 4 the suggestion. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
This is because you can only edit your post, by yourself, 24 hours after you post it...after the 24 hours is up, you'll need a mod. to do it for you. They are listed at the top of the page, e-mail them...that's what they're there for!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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earthdust Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 53predestined and foreknown |
i feel ya...  " Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. " |
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