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branden726
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0 posted 2004-10-26 11:55 PM


Love

How do you know,
When you are in love,
Is it perfect,
With hearts and doves?

Will I ever know,
If there name is Susan or Joe,
How will I know where to go.

Is love just like the movies,
Where everyone gets all warm and fuzzy,
Or is it like in school,
Where bobby is seeing Joann, Mary and Sue.

I may not know now,
Later I’m sure I will,
Have my heart filled,
And sometimes turned blue.


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HopelessRomanticGuy
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1 posted 2004-10-27 12:17 PM


"I may not know now,
Later I’m sure I will,
Have my heart filled,
And sometimes turned blue."

So very true.  You got it right on the first try.  Love lifts you up, and then drops you back down, HARD. It'll all be worth it, though.  Great poem, man.

                


                                                         -Rich


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2 posted 2004-10-27 05:01 PM


"Is love just like the movies,
Where everyone gets all warm and fuzzy,
Or is it like in school,
Where bobby is seeing Joann, Mary and Sue."


Like Rich said, your poems are always so true.  This is a great poem...I can't wait to read more of you! (also gald to see that your posting again...i probably wasn't here when you used to.)

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WranglrButts9
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3 posted 2004-10-27 07:57 PM


This is really good! I like it tons!

Wow, I really dont know what to say. But this is awesome!

Bailey

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and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

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